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Georgetown,
School Target
When I think of
Georgetown University, I think of Washington and world affairs. I do not
know yet exactly what type of professional career I will pursue after
schooling, but I do know that I wish to be internationally aware and
involved, and that Georgetown would provide me with a solid foundation
for that goal.
I am glad I do
not know specifically what I want to do later on, because it should be
an adventure choosing which course I will take in life. Thus, I have
time to experiment and learn from a wide variety of topics. At
Georgetown, I am present with the opportunity to take any classes I want
and to be taught by some of the most learned and dynamic professors in
the world. I was once told that in college, I "will take classes in
subjects I had never thought or heard of, " and I am very excited to do
this.
If I were
required to pick a major at this instant, I would choose history. If
history were only studying, memorizing and regurgitating events, facts,
and dates, I would be just as uninterested as most people. However, in
studying history, I get a chance to contemplate ideologies and the
nature of human beings. I believe that Georgetown University is the best
place in the world to study history. It is a school located in
Washington, D.C., the capital of the country, of outstanding academic
reputation and recognition; my resources would be absolutely unlimited.
Living in Washington, I would feel the pulse of our world today. The
United States is the world's dominant power and every issue of great
global importance is brought to the country's capital.
I have been told
that although Georgetown has approximately 6,000 undergraduates, the
students and faculty alike feel as if the school is a small, interwoven
community. I believe that this sense of closeness is a vital aspect in
an outstanding college experience. We learn most from interactions among
other people, and the fact that this reputation of faculty accessibility
and student involvement-both in the immediate Georgetown community and
in Washington, D.C.-exists, is very attractive to me.
Johns Hopkins,
School Target
The college
admissions and selection process is a very important one, perhaps one
that will have the greatest impact on one's future. The college that a
person will go to often influences his personality, views, and career.
Therefore, when I hear people say that "it doesn't matter that much
which college you go to. You can get a good education anywhere, if you
are self-motivated," I tend to be rather skeptical. Perhaps, as far as
actual knowledge is concerned, that statement is somewhat valid. Physics
and mathematics are the same, regardless of where they are taught.
Knowledge, however, is only a small piece of the puzzle that is college,
and it is in the rest of that puzzle that colleges differ.
At least as
important, or even more important, than knowledge, is the attitude
towards that knowledge. Last year, when my engineering team was
competing in the NEDC Design Challenge, held at Hopkins, after the
competition I and a few friends talked to a professor of civil
engineering. What struck me is the passion with which he talked about
his field of study. At Hopkins, everyone-the students, the faculty, the
administration-displays a certain earnestness about learning. This makes
Hopkins a good match for me, as I, too, am very enthusiastic about the
subjects I study. I love learning, and when those around me do too, it
creates a great atmosphere from which everyone benefits.
My enthusiasm and
activeness extend not just to academics, but to other aspects of life as
well. I am very involved in extracurricular activities, participating in
my school's engineering club and math team, and I love sports, having
played on the varsity soccer and tennis teams for three years. This
makes Hopkins, with its great sport traditions and a multitude of clubs
and organizations, a great choice. Further, while in college I intend to
explore new activities. Because of my school's small size and dual
curriculum, there is a relatively narrow spectrum of activities
available for me. Hopkins affords a great opportunity for me to branch
out and participate in organizations to which I previously had no
access.
Another aspect of
Hopkins that attracts me greatly is its student body, diverse and
multicultural, but at the same time uniformly strong academically. Since
I myself am a refugee from Russia, where I experienced social and
cultural anti-Semitism, multiculturalism and acceptance of different
groups are very important to me, not to mention that it allows me to
meet people of different backgrounds and learn of their varying
perspectives. And this summer at the U.S.A. Mathematical Talent Search
Young Scholars' Program, I experienced the thrill of working in a group
where everyone is on the same, or higher, intellectual level as I. I
think that, given my academic and cultural background, I would fit in
well with the student life at Hopkins and contribute to it.
Academically,
too, I believe I would fit Hopkins well. Though Hopkins is most known
for its medical program, its engineering school is also one of the best,
and that is the general area of study I intend to pursue. In high
school, I've most enjoyed my mathematics and science courses,
particularly physics, and I have participated in the engineering school,
so attending Hopkins' engineering program would be a natural extension
of my high school interests. However, my interests are not confined
solely to the sciences. I enjoy courses from all areas of curriculum,
particularly unorthodox and thought-provoking ones. Therefore, Hopkins,
which according to the viewbook "is geared toward educating students in
the fundamentals of their field of interest while illuminating wider
possibilities through interdisciplinary study" is perfect for me.
Of course, none
of those aspects of Hopkins, neither their great student body, their
world-renowned faculty, their research centers, nor their clubs and
extracurricular opportunities, are worth anything unless one takes
advantage of them. That, however, is exactly what I intend to do. While
many people find the transition to college overwhelming, therefore not
participating in the student life fully the first year, I hope to plunge
immediately into the full array of possibility and make as much use of
them as possible. Though my soccer and tennis skills might prove
insufficient to earn me a place on Hopkins' varsity teams (though I hope
that's not the case,) I nevertheless want to play sports at least on the
club level. Other than that, however, nothing is set in stone except for
one thing-to take as full and broad advantage of what Hopkins has to
offer as possible.
Comments
Both of these
essays show that the writers know the schools and have some specific
reasons for wanting to attend them. The first focuses more on the
academic environment and surrounding city. The second combines several
aspects such as academics, extracurriculars, and a diverse student body.
Both applicants also use the opportunity to show that they would fit in
by highlighting their own interests and activities (an interest in
history in the first and math, tennis, and soccer in the second).
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